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Social Detection

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Detective John Sanderson knocked on the door frame, wincing at the pain shooting through his hand. Damn arthritis. The captain looked up and gestured him in with a wave, never making eye contact.

“You asked to speak with me, Captain?” John eased himself into a chair. The captain finished off his note and closed the file on his desk. Purple flag, John noted. Must be dealing with the recent escalated gang activity.

“I wanted an update on the First National Bank robbery. Any leads on the case?”

John flipped open the black notebook he always carried with him. “Some. This is the most complex case I think I’ve ever dealt with, Captain. In all my years, I’ve never seen anything like it.” He scanned the page. “Are you familiar with ‘social media’? Twitter, Facebook, Pinterest?”

“I have two teenage daughters, Sanderson. What’s the link?” The barest hint of a smile graced the captain’s lips. John nodded briskly.

“It seems the robbers used something called a ‘hashtag’ to connect with the gang members for the heist. And the instructions themselves were all coded but if you know what to look for, it’s all laid out. Crystal clear.”

The captain leaned back in his chair, fingers tented before him. “How did you figure it out? Can’t say you strike me as a tweeter.” The smile ghosted across his face again. John forcibly relaxed his jaw before speaking.

“One of the new recruits was talking about this ongoing thread on Twitter involving the hashtag #secretpiefridge. Pretty funny stuff if you see them in isolation. He showed me a few then opened up the whole thread. If you have them continuous on a screen a coded pattern emerges laying out coordinates, exits, security, cameras…It’s a primer on bank robbery in some respects” John looked up from his notes to see the captain staring at him. Clearing his throat, he continued. “I’ve set the IT department on tracing the various IPs and pinpointing the key accounts sending the messages. It’ll take time to get it.”

“Good work, Sanderson.” The captain flipped open the file on his desk again, dismissing him. John stood up, groaning under his breath as his knees popped. As he turned to leave, the captain spoke.

“Nice to see even us old dogs can learn new tricks.”

“Yes sir.” John smiled as he walked out.

~*~*~

Write On Edge: Red-Writing-HoodEvery in-joke has a backstory, a moment when events coalesce into something memorably funny.

But you had to be there.

I know not everyone is on Twitter, so bear with me here. #hashtags can be fun, whimsical, serious, informative. We have one: #writeonedge. Hashtags can also function as a kind of code, a public nod to a private joke.

Sometimes they pass you by and you pause. “What? What was that?” And you can’t help but wonder what inspired that hashtag.

In that spirit, for Friday write a 400 word or less scene which shows the event(s) which led to this hashtag:

#secretpiefridge

And because I just can’t pass up the fun of a prompt I’ve used primer from this week’s Inspiration Monday over at BeKindRewrite.

Author: Carrie

Married 30-something with 2 girls. Living in a house under constant renovation. Trying to reignite my creative writing flame :)

21 thoughts on “Social Detection

  1. Pingback: Inspiration Monday: brush with life « BeKindRewrite

  2. I love when someone grabs a prompt and just runs off with it! I would never have some up with something like this, and I am PSYCHED that you did. Hashtag heist FTW!

  3. This creative and extremely smart. There’s a Patricia Cornwell quality to this, except, I like you better.

    The opening paragraph is perfect.

  4. I love it! Clever and gripping. The emphasis on his age, and the challenges of dealing with new media – yet no loss of talent – is so great. Makes you really root for this guy. This should be a movie!

  5. Pretty clever, Carrie… you should be writing for CSI… liked the ending, it put in a different perspective.

    • If i was really clever i could have figured out my own tweet code….but i’m not so i leave it to your imagination.

      Thanks for reading :)

      • I only read the story. I usually read the prompt section, but was in a rush. I post some pics on twitter from time to time, but don’t do anything on it and do not understand the whole thing anyway. Hashtags escape me completely. You can’t do everything. I’ve started putting pics on Instagram, and of course facebook and my PhotoLog… I do a pic a day… Have you seen it Carrie? I don’t remember your cute little avatar visiting my page. http://tedbooksdailypics.com

        • The story is really all that matters :)

          I used to be more active on Twitter. I might end up being on there more if i get closer to publishing something. I’ll need to start really interacting with other write folks and publishing people. Tis the way of the future i think.

          • Oh for sure, it has to be a useful publicity tool. It’s interesting to see all the news people, who at first made light of facebook and twitter, jumping on the bandwagon.

  6. Very nice to see a unique twist on the prompt. Was pleasantly surprised since this did not feel like “chick lit.” Also had fun with the puns (Whats the Link? hehe)

  7. Very nicely done! A creative take on the prompt.

  8. Very imaginative. And I will never look at a cryptic tweet the same way again.

  9. Brilliant! I can totally see crime planned like this. Hell, revolutions have started on Twitter.

    Very clever use of the prompt. Brava!

  10. This was ingenious. I loved the ‘old dog’ comment!

  11. so fun … love the creative use of the prompt. Techno-robbers using Twitter – so bold and contemporary!

  12. I LOVE the detective. He feels so REAL. The whole idea of using twitter to plan the robbery and brazenly put it in hashtags is awesome. Also 140 characters or less. I’d LOVE to see that.

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