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Cinnamon

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He breathed deeply, absorbing the fragrant, humid air. To some the room would be constricting, claustrophobic. To him it was comforting, soothing.

He slid past the table, stopping at the counter. Supplies were scattered across the surface. His eye twitched at the mess, his anxiety over disorder building.

“This will never do.” His voice slithered out in a sibilant hush. The skittering behind him brought a smile. He could almost taste the fear. A slender bottle of cinnamon clutched in his fingers, he turned.

“Just a dash,” he cooed as he dumped the contents into the girl’s wrenched open mouth.

~*~*~

The word this week is Cinnamon over at Velvet Verbosity’s place.

I just read a really creepy book (review coming soon) and with The Husband’s recent flash fictions my mind is going to dark places.

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Author: Carrie

Married 30-something with 2 girls. Living in a house under constant renovation. Trying to reignite my creative writing flame :)

18 thoughts on “Cinnamon

  1. Definitely a shudder inducing story.

  2. That’s a gripping story for 100 words.

  3. Creepy! But in a good way as it makes my hair stand. The rest of the mystery please? =)

  4. A forced cinnamon challenge. Not quite so funny as Glozelle – much more creepy!

  5. Death by cinnamon? You might have stumbled upon a great idea for a new series of mystery novels.

  6. we both know how Millicent likes to use cinnamon to do her “work”.

    I liked your word choices especially sibilant hush. This was a strong, tight 100, Carrie.

  7. I like this side of you!

  8. Woah – you can’t swallow that shit without water. She’s going to choke to death. Nasty!!

  9. That’s nice and creepy, and in so few words no less.

  10. Some great writing here. I’m a little uncertain as to what is going on. Is the woman being punished for the disorder? But your choice of words; constricting, claustrophobic, slid, slithered, sibilant. Perfect!

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