He breathed deeply, absorbing the fragrant, humid air. To some the room would be constricting, claustrophobic. To him it was comforting, soothing.
He slid past the table, stopping at the counter. Supplies were scattered across the surface. His eye twitched at the mess, his anxiety over disorder building.
“This will never do.” His voice slithered out in a sibilant hush. The skittering behind him brought a smile. He could almost taste the fear. A slender bottle of cinnamon clutched in his fingers, he turned.
“Just a dash,” he cooed as he dumped the contents into the girl’s wrenched open mouth.
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The word this week is Cinnamon over at Velvet Verbosity’s place.
I just read a really creepy book (review coming soon) and with The Husband’s recent flash fictions my mind is going to dark places.
September 13, 2012 at 6:07 pm
Definitely a shudder inducing story.
September 13, 2012 at 11:37 am
I agree: artfully creepy.
September 13, 2012 at 12:11 pm
thank you
September 12, 2012 at 7:23 pm
That’s a gripping story for 100 words.
September 12, 2012 at 2:13 am
Creepy! But in a good way as it makes my hair stand. The rest of the mystery please? =)
September 11, 2012 at 9:34 pm
A forced cinnamon challenge. Not quite so funny as Glozelle – much more creepy!
September 11, 2012 at 7:13 pm
Death by cinnamon? You might have stumbled upon a great idea for a new series of mystery novels.
September 11, 2012 at 8:07 pm
It’s like you read my mind
September 11, 2012 at 8:15 pm
Ok, let’s not tell anyone. But if you ever need help, my cooking stinks but my writing is adequate!
September 11, 2012 at 6:48 pm
we both know how Millicent likes to use cinnamon to do her “work”.
I liked your word choices especially sibilant hush. This was a strong, tight 100, Carrie.
September 11, 2012 at 6:02 pm
I like this side of you!
September 11, 2012 at 6:46 pm
Lol. Bad influences, i’m telling you!
September 11, 2012 at 7:59 pm
Hahha.
September 11, 2012 at 5:42 pm
Woah – you can’t swallow that shit without water. She’s going to choke to death. Nasty!!
September 11, 2012 at 5:39 pm
That’s nice and creepy, and in so few words no less.
September 11, 2012 at 5:37 pm
Some great writing here. I’m a little uncertain as to what is going on. Is the woman being punished for the disorder? But your choice of words; constricting, claustrophobic, slid, slithered, sibilant. Perfect!
September 11, 2012 at 6:46 pm
Thanks Paul. In my mind he’s a serial killer with inventive methods of killing
she tried to escape and made the mess.
September 11, 2012 at 9:53 pm
That’s very dark. I prefer to read, and write about, happy things like rainbows and unicorns.