Jeff paused at the entry to the kitchen silently observing his mother seated at the table. His father’s urn sat next to her plate, gleaming in the low morning light, and a pile of mail graced the opposite side. A single sheet of paper shook in Elinor’s long skeletal fingers. She sighed and placed it down gently, smoothing the creases as he took a seat across from her.
“Morning, Mom. What’s that?” He gestured to the discarded letter. World weary eyes met his, a smile fighting to show itself on her age ravaged skin. She waved a hand over the letter.
“Nothing, really. It’s not as if I didn’t expect this…” She took a deep breath, dabbing her eyes with her napkin. “It’s from the bank. The sale has been finalized on the farm.” Her lip trembled and tears clung to her lashes. “I know it has to be this way…we couldn’t keep it in the family forever…”
Jeff clutched his mother’s delicate hand in his own, his blocky, square tipped fingers reminiscent of his late father’s. “It’ll be okay, Mom. I-“
Elinor cut him off, a forced expression of cheerfulness gracing her elegant profile as she glanced over at the clock. “Pshaw, don’t molly-coddle a melodramatic old woman.” She met his gaze again and her lips curved up. “Besides, who’d want that old dinosaur anyway? Barn’s crumbling, house needs new plumbing…I’m glad I never have to use that dastardly antique of a stove again!”
Jeff raised an eyebrow at his mother’s sudden about face. “Are you sure you’re okay with this Mom? Ready to let go?”
“Yes,” she said, her fingers lightly stroking the urn. “It was time.”
“Well, that’s unfortunate.” Jeff pushed up from the table.
“Why do you say that?”
“Because I’m the new owner of the property.” Jeff placed a kiss on her brow. “I was hoping you’d show me how to work that old stove.” He smiled at the tears of happiness trickling down her cheeks.
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This flash fiction brought to you by Trifecta and their word of the week: Dinosaur - 3: one that is impractically large, out-of-date, or obsolete
September 5, 2012 at 11:01 am
such a sweet story
September 1, 2012 at 9:11 am
What a sweet piece!
August 30, 2012 at 8:43 pm
That was an unexpected ending. Great job! I got a little choked up at the sweet gesture, I think because I have two young boys and I hope that they would treat me well when I’m an old dinosaur. (Well, they think I’m a dinosaur right now, but that doesn’t count
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August 30, 2012 at 7:30 pm
Now that is a good son. What a sweet take on the prompt. Thanks for joining us again. Please come on back for the new challenge tomorrow.
August 30, 2012 at 6:30 pm
Very touching. When i reached the part about her putting on a brave face, i was fervently hoping that some miracle would happen towards the end… And it did
August 30, 2012 at 4:13 pm
Beautifully done Carrie. Such nice imagery!
August 30, 2012 at 4:04 pm
Oh what a delightful twist! That gave me goosebumps. I love how Jeff played his hand.
August 30, 2012 at 4:08 pm
thanks you *bows* I do love the twist ending
August 30, 2012 at 2:37 pm
Oh how sweet and such a wonderful ending. She putting on a brave face and then the tears of joy when she realized that she didn’t really have to let that “old dinosaur” go. Great job!
August 30, 2012 at 2:44 pm
thanks Tessa. Glad you enjoyed it
August 30, 2012 at 2:36 pm
Beautifully written and poignant. Everything everybody else said too!!
August 30, 2012 at 2:04 pm
Wonderful, sweet, and well written. Thanks for this
August 30, 2012 at 11:49 am
A tender, sweet moment between a son and mother. I loved the ending.
August 30, 2012 at 11:25 am
This is a wonderful story–good job.
August 30, 2012 at 11:22 am
very impactful
I wish molly-coddle had been the word. Because it’s awesome.
well written Carrie…almost as good as your husband (joking)
August 30, 2012 at 11:28 am
oooohhh, them’s fightin’ words Lance
August 30, 2012 at 9:58 am
that made me cry a little as well. she put on such a brave face! i love this piece.
August 30, 2012 at 9:46 am
This is beautiful.
August 30, 2012 at 8:11 am
Oh!! *grabs a tissue* You got me!! And wow! Was that ending a punch ( a good one!!) You really captured that emotion well. Incredibly awesome flash!
August 30, 2012 at 8:15 am
thanks SAM
August 30, 2012 at 6:01 am
I cried reading this. Great writing!
August 30, 2012 at 8:15 am
thank you