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Payment

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Duncan Diggle sighed and wept, huge alligator tears bouncing down his plump apple cheeks. He paused periodically to peruse the letter in his hands. His drama eventually disturbed his long suffering wife Dotty.

“Oh Duncan, what is the matter?”

Duncan paused yet again and gestured despondently to the delightful pastel displayed before him.

“My picture, dear Dotty. They want my picture!”

Dotty furrowed her brown.

“I don’t understand, darling. The picture?”

“Why yes! Don’t you see,” he says shaking the letter, “it asks me to PLEASE REMIT YOUR PAYMENT PROMPTLY. How do they know about Payment, my drawing?”

“Darling Duncan, that’s the phone bill.”

image by Jeremy Gann

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Inspired by Jenny Matlock’s Saturday Centus

The prompt this week is:  “ PLEASE REMIT YOUR PAYMENT PROMPTLY!’
Number of words: 100 words PLUS the five words of the prompt.   105 maximum word total.
Style of writing: Any
Pictures: Any Jenny Matlock

And Bloggy Mom’s Writer’s Workshop. Use the image above to craft a max 750 word story.

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Author: Carrie

Married 30-something with 2 girls. Living in a house under constant renovation. Trying to reignite my creative writing flame :)

4 thoughts on “Payment

  1. Surprising and clever take on the prompt. I enjoyed it. laurie

  2. This gave me a good giggle. I love it!!

  3. What a clever take on the prompt!!! Very original!!

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